The Water Buffalo Chronicles

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The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Excalibur » 06 Jul 2014, 03:23

this is where I will do my buffalo things.
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Angel » 06 Jul 2014, 03:55

Excalibur wrote:this is where I will do my buffalo things.

. . . I'm sorry but when I read this I busted up laughing.
Go about your Baffalo-ness.
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Mewtwo Power » 06 Jul 2014, 19:24

AlsAngel wrote:
Excalibur wrote:this is where I will do my buffalo things.

. . . I'm sorry but when I read this I busted up laughing.
Go about your Baffalo-ness.


What's with the Buffaloes?


For crying out loud! Mewtwo is the best, and always will be the best!

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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Excalibur » 06 Jul 2014, 20:11

Mewtwo Power wrote:
AlsAngel wrote:
Excalibur wrote:this is where I will do my buffalo things.

. . . I'm sorry but when I read this I busted up laughing.
Go about your Baffalo-ness.


What's with the Buffaloes?


the water buffalo is one of my favorite animals. It is also an RP character of mine.

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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Excalibur » 07 Jul 2014, 01:47

-the water buffalo walks in to the lush savannah, and admires all the grass available to him. He walks forward inhaling the sweet scent of grass. He lowers his head and eats a mouthful of grass. -
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby The Divine Potato » 07 Jul 2014, 01:57

Okay, someone get the safari gear.
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Angel » 07 Jul 2014, 03:58

Excalibur wrote:-the water buffalo walks in to the lush savannah, and admires all the grass available to him. He walks forward inhaling the sweet scent of grass. He lowers his head and eats a mouthful of grass. -

Might I suggest using a wider variety of words to make it sound more interesting... instead of the buffalo saw the grass, the buffalo smelled the grass, the buffalo ate the grass.
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Excalibur » 07 Jul 2014, 17:10

AlsAngel wrote:
Excalibur wrote:-the water buffalo walks in to the lush savannah, and admires all the grass available to him. He walks forward inhaling the sweet scent of grass. He lowers his head and eats a mouthful of grass. -

Might I suggest using a wider variety of words to make it sound more interesting... instead of the buffalo saw the grass, the buffalo smelled the grass, the buffalo ate the grass.



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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Excalibur » 19 Jul 2014, 04:12

-The buffalo sat down to take a nap-
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Re: The Water Buffalo Chronicles

Postby Zia- » 20 Jul 2014, 12:57

Excalibur wrote:-The buffalo sat down to take a nap-

what Angel said, this is under the para rp forum, at least make a few sentences if not paragraphs to describe your actions.
for example.

; The buffalo snorted as flies buzzed around its face, its large nostrils flaring as the intense tropical sun beat down on the harsh humid landscape, the heat of the day had barely reached its peak as the buffalo settled down under the shade of a large tree. The beast's tail swatted the few flies that dared travel around its rear while its body shifted to get comfortable on the hard dried ground. Sensing no danger, the buffalo lowered its head onto one of its forelimbs, its heavily lashed eyes closing as sleep overcame the tired animal. ;
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