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Re: poem central

Postby Lightning Orb » 28 Jan 2011, 13:07

Fuipui wrote:
I write books, too. I have two books in the making.

Yeah,
I have one, still needs checked out, but it's good, right now.
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Re: poem central

Postby anoa » 29 Jan 2011, 03:03

haha we're doin poetry in school now. heres one...
there are many season in a year
with death and life and heat and cold
but there are two which i hold dear
spring and winter with stories untold
that's all ive gotten to but its gonna be a sonnet. ive also started a ballad, bout osmeone dying...
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Re: poem central

Postby Lightning Orb » 31 Jan 2011, 13:17

anoa wrote:haha we're doin poetry in school now. heres one...
there are many season in a year
with death and life and heat and cold
but there are two which i hold dear
spring and winter with stories untold
that's all ive gotten to but its gonna be a sonnet. ive also started a ballad, bout osmeone dying...

Ah thats awesome.
lol.
Damn now I wish so badly that I would write poetry
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Re: poem central

Postby Lamb » 02 Feb 2011, 23:44

tears are words the heart can not discripe
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Re: poem central

Postby woofwoof » 08 Feb 2011, 02:48

I write books, but I've always wanted to write poems. My books are really good, and I've written 'stories' since I was in 1st or 2nd grade, although back then they really, really sucked. Lol. But now I do quite well, and I'm working on my most recent book about a young teenage girl and boy born with special powers.. yeah, the usual crap. But hey, maybe I can make some cash! Haha I'm hoping to publish this one! And now to come up with a poem off the top of my head.

Shadows fall when the sun disappears
The human's eyes fill with tears
As they watch their city burn and their families bodies fade
The children learn how life can be frayed
They grow up with hardships many can't bear
And show others how the shadows dare
To ruin the lives of those innocents
That were only trying to live life to it's best

Wow. That sucked. xD But c'mon, I just now thought it up!

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Re: poem central

Postby Sphinx » 08 Feb 2011, 10:16

woofwoof wrote:I write books, but I've always wanted to write poems. My books are really good, and I've written 'stories' since I was in 1st or 2nd grade, although back then they really, really sucked. Lol. But now I do quite well, and I'm working on my most recent book about a young teenage girl and boy born with special powers.. yeah, the usual crap. But hey, maybe I can make some cash! Haha I'm hoping to publish this one! And now to come up with a poem off the top of my head.

Shadows fall when the sun disappears
The human's eyes fill with tears
As they watch their city burn and their families bodies fade
The children learn how life can be frayed
They grow up with hardships many can't bear
And show others how the shadows dare
To ruin the lives of those innocents
That were only trying to live life to it's best

Wow. That sucked. xD But c'mon, I just now thought it up!

WOOF!!


the only thing that didnt work was the last two lines...they didnt rhyme like the others....but apart from that it was actually pretty good :D
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Re: poem central

Postby Lightning Orb » 09 Feb 2011, 13:39

If I get his permission, Caleb has a poem I would like to upload.
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Re: poem central

Postby Lamb » 11 Feb 2011, 01:47

Sphinx wrote:
woofwoof wrote:I write books, but I've always wanted to write poems. My books are really good, and I've written 'stories' since I was in 1st or 2nd grade, although back then they really, really sucked. Lol. But now I do quite well, and I'm working on my most recent book about a young teenage girl and boy born with special powers.. yeah, the usual crap. But hey, maybe I can make some cash! Haha I'm hoping to publish this one! And now to come up with a poem off the top of my head.

Shadows fall when the sun disappears
The human's eyes fill with tears
As they watch their city burn and their families bodies fade
The children learn how life can be frayed
They grow up with hardships many can't bear
And show others how the shadows dare
To ruin the lives of those innocents
That were only trying to live life to it's best

Wow. That sucked. xD But c'mon, I just now thought it up!

WOOF!!


the only thing that didnt work was the last two lines...they didnt rhyme like the others....but apart from that it was actually pretty good :D

dude poems don't have to ryhme
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Re: poem central

Postby Lightning Orb » 11 Feb 2011, 13:09

Lamb wrote:dude poems don't have to ryhme

Indeed they don't. Some of the world's greatest poems do not consist of rhymeing words
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Re: poem central

Postby Lamb » 12 Feb 2011, 00:33

i have a choice to two things,freedom or death,
if i can't have one i sall havete other
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