Writing Section!

[Shadowstar1922]

For the authors of FWG, we should make a new category where people post poems, short stories, and their books, so it's all collected together and if anyone wanted to go on a reading spree, it'd be there. I think this would be really cool and would help a lot of young authors and writers on FWG to be able to become better at writing from seeing other people's work, and, having an audience to motivate them to write more!

I think it'd be very cool. What do you guys think?

[Dr Frook]

why not just write stories here? Here's a quick one that just came to mind

Once upon a time in a frook far far away there was this little planet called Earth.

The creatures of this planet did not know they existed within the frook entity, and that was the way the frook wanted things to remain. The frook was concerned for the sanity of the Earthians if they were to find out the truth of their situation.



Not everything was perfect in this world, but it was, by and large, a lovely planet for the Earthian population to thrive.

They only had one thing to fear. Something that brought terror to many. Something that happened on a regular basis. Something that comes naturally to frooks throughout the multiverse. Jiggling.

Every time the frook jiggled, there were massive earthquakes and tsunamis throughout the planet. This caused destruction and chaos for many of the Earthians. As time passed, and the inhabitants of the frook grew steadily more sophisticated and knowledgeable, they came to the realisation that the earthquakes were not a natural phenomenon. They weren't being caused by tectonic processes, as was hypothesised by scientists centuries earlier. The jiggling was not natural.

Millennia more of investigations provided the answer. The answer the frook never wanted the Earthians to know. The truth.

There were dire consequences following this discovery. Chaos reigned throughout the small planet. Religions failed, new religions arose, wars happened, death happened, but most of all there was anger and hatred for what the frook was and his incessant jiggling. No one wanted to be in the stomach of some interdimensional, multiversal being. No one.

All this unhappiness amongst the Earthians gave the frook an upset stomach. And as you know, a bowel movement is the best way to address such problems. So as anyone would do, the frook took some ant-acid, went to the nearest toilet (a black hole only a few thousand light years away), and did his business.



And so ends the tale of the Earthians. They existed a long long ago, in a frook far far away. A black hole killed them in the end, but it was truth that ultimately led to their destruction.

[Flobalob]

Ok, I don't know how many of you guys have played that awesome game Vortex Wars, but the creator also writes stories. A couple of us had to clean up the mess Google Translate made (The guy's Slovakian), so it might not be right at parts.

[Lamb]

Once upon a time, Lamb did not have a heart.
He was cold, and an evil being.
He saw a girl that he liked and so he spoke to her.
She quickly figured out that Lamb was a bad person.
Lamb kept speaking to her for over a year.
After that time, Lamb told her his feelings.
She Rejected him.
Lamb was sad.
So Lamb went on in life and spoke to others about how he felt.
There was a girl in particular that he spoke to.
To Lamb she looked like a good person, but somewhat out of Lamb's reach.
So Lamb just spoke to her about how he was doing, and weeks went by.
Unknown to Lamb, this girl had feelings for him.
He was oblivious to her hints, as Lamb still had feelings for the other girl.
Time went by, and Lamb started having feelings for this new girl.
Eventually Lamb gave her his growing heart.
She took it into her hands and did the same.
Lamb slowly started to build back up.
Lamb and this girl spent some time with each other.
Eventually, a ball was coming up so Lamb decided to take her to it.
At the Ball, Lamb was happy for the first time in his life.
Lamb and her were having a great time.
About 5 days after the ball, she dropped Lamb's heart to the ground, and shattered it to pieces.
Lamb was sad, because he really liked this girl.
Lamb wishes he could go back to the time they spent, but sadly that isn't possible.
Lamb plans on waiting.. and wait he shall.

[Dr Frook]

Once upon a time, Lamb did not have a heart.
He was cold, and an evil being.
He saw a girl that he liked and so he spoke to her.
She quickly figured out that Lamb was a bad person.
Lamb kept speaking to her for over a year.
After that time, Lamb told her his feelings.
She Rejected him.
Lamb was sad.
So Lamb went on in life and spoke to others about how he felt.
There was a girl in particular that he spoke to.
To Lamb she looked like a good person, but somewhat out of Lamb's reach.
So Lamb just spoke to her about how he was doing, and weeks went by.
Unknown to Lamb, this girl had feelings for him.
He was oblivious to her hints, as Lamb still had feelings for the other girl.
Time went by, and Lamb started having feelings for this new girl.
Eventually Lamb gave her his growing heart.
She took it into her hands and did the same.
Lamb slowly started to build back up.
Lamb and this girl spent some time with each other.
Eventually, a ball was coming up so Lamb decided to take her to it.
At the Ball, Lamb was happy for the first time in his life.
Lamb and her were having a great time.
About 5 days after the ball, she dropped Lamb's heart to the ground, and shattered it to pieces.
Lamb was sad, because he really liked this girl.
Lamb wishes he could go back to the time they spent, but sadly that isn't possible.
Lamb plans on waiting.. and wait he shall.

ah that's a really sad tale, Mr Lamb. *hugs*

[Lamb]

Once upon a time, Lamb did not have a heart.
He was cold, and an evil being.
He saw a girl that he liked and so he spoke to her.
She quickly figured out that Lamb was a bad person.
Lamb kept speaking to her for over a year.
After that time, Lamb told her his feelings.
She Rejected him.
Lamb was sad.
So Lamb went on in life and spoke to others about how he felt.
There was a girl in particular that he spoke to.
To Lamb she looked like a good person, but somewhat out of Lamb's reach.
So Lamb just spoke to her about how he was doing, and weeks went by.
Unknown to Lamb, this girl had feelings for him.
He was oblivious to her hints, as Lamb still had feelings for the other girl.
Time went by, and Lamb started having feelings for this new girl.
Eventually Lamb gave her his growing heart.
She took it into her hands and did the same.
Lamb slowly started to build back up.
Lamb and this girl spent some time with each other.
Eventually, a ball was coming up so Lamb decided to take her to it.
At the Ball, Lamb was happy for the first time in his life.
Lamb and her were having a great time.
About 5 days after the ball, she dropped Lamb's heart to the ground, and shattered it to pieces.
Lamb was sad, because he really liked this girl.
Lamb wishes he could go back to the time they spent, but sadly that isn't possible.
Lamb plans on waiting.. and wait he shall.

ah that's a really sad tale, Mr Lamb. *hugs*

Thank you frook, but Lamb forgot to mention it was based off of true events..

[Dr Frook]

Once upon a time, Lamb did not have a heart.
He was cold, and an evil being.
He saw a girl that he liked and so he spoke to her.
She quickly figured out that Lamb was a bad person.
Lamb kept speaking to her for over a year.
After that time, Lamb told her his feelings.
She Rejected him.
Lamb was sad.
So Lamb went on in life and spoke to others about how he felt.
There was a girl in particular that he spoke to.
To Lamb she looked like a good person, but somewhat out of Lamb's reach.
So Lamb just spoke to her about how he was doing, and weeks went by.
Unknown to Lamb, this girl had feelings for him.
He was oblivious to her hints, as Lamb still had feelings for the other girl.
Time went by, and Lamb started having feelings for this new girl.
Eventually Lamb gave her his growing heart.
She took it into her hands and did the same.
Lamb slowly started to build back up.
Lamb and this girl spent some time with each other.
Eventually, a ball was coming up so Lamb decided to take her to it.
At the Ball, Lamb was happy for the first time in his life.
Lamb and her were having a great time.
About 5 days after the ball, she dropped Lamb's heart to the ground, and shattered it to pieces.
Lamb was sad, because he really liked this girl.
Lamb wishes he could go back to the time they spent, but sadly that isn't possible.
Lamb plans on waiting.. and wait he shall.

ah that's a really sad tale, Mr Lamb. *hugs*

Thank you frook, but Lamb forgot to mention it was based off of true events..

I guessed...

[Shadowstar1922]

I meant to post this in the Suggestion part. .-.

I'm so stupid. >.<

[Lamb]

I meant to post this in the Suggestion part. .-.

I'm so stupid. >.<

D: No Lamb is..

[Lamb]

So here is a Poem I have to say in front of my class, Forget what the type of poetry is called but I have to say it with "emotion", I would like some suggestions on how I can make this better.
It is regarding Bullying


Deep within, there is no one who can help.
Even when, from deep within, I scream and yelp.
No solution is far greater than just reversing the cycle of pain.
The beauty of having someone's blood on my fists removes the dark clouds and rain.

Oh, the Pain of what seems eternity slowly seeps out.
I go on a complete rampage, kick, scream, and shout.
I quickly escalate from the victim, to the villain of the tell.
The one's who targeted me soon experience a living hell.

With my hands around their neck, I lose control of my instincts.
I slowly, but surely, become the monster from deep within.
I pop their neck like a popsicle stick.
Now that I want to stop, I can't.

Instead of holding in my anger, it releases itself.
I no longer control my body, it has a mind of it's own
with the mission of complete annihilation.

Bullies, a bunch of idiots, they're lucky I control my disorder.
They don't realize that when I snap, I don't stop until I destroy everything around me.
My demons comfort me so I don't turn into a beast, because when That beast is unleashed, it makes a chew toy out of everything.

From deep within comes the end, because a couple of idiots decided to set the timer to start ticking.