Rockstar's too old to be leader now.

[Shadowstar1922]

Hey guys. As some of you know, about the cat clans, or the warrior cats. those books from Erin Hunter. Well, i have made MY OWN version, so it's MY story of the books. There are RockClan, WaterClan, TreeClan, and MoonClan. All the clans have their origin leaders, (RockClan had Rockstar. TreeClan had Treestar) but WaterClan and MoonClan. MoonClan's new leader is Dawnstar, and WaterClan's new leader is Ripplestar. here is a funny momment in my story. Some are already in it, and others, i will add later. This one will be added later.

Nightwatcher's cut-upped body limped into the medicine cat den. Creekwing and Nighttail, the medicine cats of RockClan, began to examine Nightwatcher. Then Bounceleg and Dawnflower limped in too, with their body's wounded. The two medicine cats rushed as fast as they could to heal their clanmates. "Nighttail! Get marigold, cobwebs, and coltsfoot!" Creekwing's voice rasp. The old medicine cat was working on Nightwatcher. Nighttail went to the herb stock, and found the medicine.
Rockstar blasted into the den. "We need those cats out, NOW! MoonClan is attacking us!" Rockstar yowled. The old tom's eyes flashed with anger. "No, they still haven't recovered," Nighttail replied. "What???" Rockstar sounded shocked and confused."Nighttail glared at his leader. "They need to recover, Rockstar. If you make them fight now, those wounds will get infected. They need to recover" Creekwing said.
"When did that start happening?" Rockstar asked, with his head turned to the side. Creekwing and Nighttail stared at their leader, astonished, and jaws wide open. "Wh-when you became leader!" Creekwing stuttered. "And when was that?" Rockstar rasped. " A VERY long time ago..." Dawnflower muttered.
Part of Second to Last Chapter of Book 1
As you can see, Rockstar is way to old, to be leader. Sadly, he dies weeks after this battle, from old age. His Deputy, Stoneclaw, becomes leader. His new deputy is Nightwatcher, a fairly old tom, that stays deputy for quite some time, untill Stoneclaw's son, Oakpaw, who later becomes Oakstone, becomes the next deputy, after Nightwatcher dies in battle with WaterClan. It was Oakstone's destiny to become leader of RockClan, and became Stonestar's next deputy. In the next three books after this one, about 16 seasons(4 years) Oakstone becomes leader.

*WARNING* I might put be putting up my stories, only chapter at a time, and i will put the cats in Each Clan, and after each Chapter, i will update the clans.

[Shadowstar1922]

*tear* i'm gonna miss Rockstar. That crazy bag of bones was like, AWESOME!!!!!

[wii dude is the best]

Hey guys. As some of you know, about the cat clans, or the warrior cats. those books from Erin Hunter. Well, i have made MY OWN version, so it's MY story of the books. There are RockClan, WaterClan, TreeClan, and MoonClan. All the clans have their origin leaders, (RockClan had Rockstar. TreeClan had Treestar) but WaterClan and MoonClan. MoonClan's new leader is Dawnstar, and WaterClan's new leader is Ripplestar. here is a funny momment in my story. Some are already in it, and others, i will add later. This one will be added later.

Nightwatcher's cut-upped body limped into the medicine cat den. Creekwing and Nighttail, the medicine cats of RockClan, began to examine Nightwatcher. Then Bounceleg and Dawnflower limped in too, with their body's wounded. The two medicine cats rushed as fast as they could to heal their clanmates. "Nighttail! Get marigold, cobwebs, and coltsfoot!" Creekwing's voice rasp. The old medicine cat was working on Nightwatcher. Nighttail went to the herb stock, and found the medicine.
Rockstar blasted into the den. "We need those cats out, NOW! MoonClan is attacking us!" Rockstar yowled. The old tom's eyes flashed with anger. "No, they still haven't recovered," Nighttail replied. "What???" Rockstar sounded shocked and confused."Nighttail glared at his leader. "They need to recover, Rockstar. If you make them fight now, those wounds will get infected. They need to recover" Creekwing said.
"When did that start happening?" Rockstar asked, with his head turned to the side. Creekwing and Nighttail stared at their leader, astonished, and jaws wide open. "Wh-when you became leader!" Creekwing stuttered. "And when was that?" Rockstar rasped. " A VERY long time ago..." Dawnflower muttered.
Part of Second to Last Chapter of Book 1
As you can see, Rockstar is way to old, to be leader. Sadly, he dies weeks after this battle, from old age. His Deputy, Stoneclaw, becomes leader. His new deputy is Nightwatcher, a fairly old tom, that stays deputy for quite some time, untill Stoneclaw's son, Oakpaw, who later becomes Oakstone, becomes the next deputy, after Nightwatcher dies in battle with WaterClan. It was Oakstone's destiny to become leader of RockClan, and became Stonestar's next deputy. In the next three books after this one, about 16 seasons(4 years) Oakstone becomes leader.

*WARNING* I might put be putting up my stories, only chapter at a time, and i will put the cats in Each Clan, and after each Chapter, i will update the clans.

this is the wrong forum dude, this should be on the shadowclan forum in RP

[Shadowstar1922]

Hey guys. As some of you know, about the cat clans, or the warrior cats. those books from Erin Hunter. Well, i have made MY OWN version, so it's MY story of the books. There are RockClan, WaterClan, TreeClan, and MoonClan. All the clans have their origin leaders, (RockClan had Rockstar. TreeClan had Treestar) but WaterClan and MoonClan. MoonClan's new leader is Dawnstar, and WaterClan's new leader is Ripplestar. here is a funny momment in my story. Some are already in it, and others, i will add later. This one will be added later.

Nightwatcher's cut-upped body limped into the medicine cat den. Creekwing and Nighttail, the medicine cats of RockClan, began to examine Nightwatcher. Then Bounceleg and Dawnflower limped in too, with their body's wounded. The two medicine cats rushed as fast as they could to heal their clanmates. "Nighttail! Get marigold, cobwebs, and coltsfoot!" Creekwing's voice rasp. The old medicine cat was working on Nightwatcher. Nighttail went to the herb stock, and found the medicine.
Rockstar blasted into the den. "We need those cats out, NOW! MoonClan is attacking us!" Rockstar yowled. The old tom's eyes flashed with anger. "No, they still haven't recovered," Nighttail replied. "What???" Rockstar sounded shocked and confused."Nighttail glared at his leader. "They need to recover, Rockstar. If you make them fight now, those wounds will get infected. They need to recover" Creekwing said.
"When did that start happening?" Rockstar asked, with his head turned to the side. Creekwing and Nighttail stared at their leader, astonished, and jaws wide open. "Wh-when you became leader!" Creekwing stuttered. "And when was that?" Rockstar rasped. " A VERY long time ago..." Dawnflower muttered.
Part of Second to Last Chapter of Book 1
As you can see, Rockstar is way to old, to be leader. Sadly, he dies weeks after this battle, from old age. His Deputy, Stoneclaw, becomes leader. His new deputy is Nightwatcher, a fairly old tom, that stays deputy for quite some time, untill Stoneclaw's son, Oakpaw, who later becomes Oakstone, becomes the next deputy, after Nightwatcher dies in battle with WaterClan. It was Oakstone's destiny to become leader of RockClan, and became Stonestar's next deputy. In the next three books after this one, about 16 seasons(4 years) Oakstone becomes leader.

*WARNING* I might put be putting up my stories, only chapter at a time, and i will put the cats in Each Clan, and after each Chapter, i will update the clans.

this is the wrong forum dude, this should be on the shadowclan forum in RP

dude, this is a story. it has nothing to do with rp'ing, i even had the word, "book" in it, and said it was a story! i'm writting a book, and i thought, i could put it on fwg. THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO, WITH SHADOWCLAN, OR RP'ING!

[Shadowstar1922]

This is to much reading.. i dont get it..

I'll be putting up my story, and my story explains it. What it basicly is, is that there are 4 clans, in a forest. and they're all cats. the thing i posted, is an old cat, called Rockstar, was acting crazy, and stuff. read the warrior code here,
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=5388
and read the warrior code. it's a story, so there is alot of reading.

[purpledeer]

lol, conny. i'm doing BOTH. i'm still doing the ShadowClan thing, but i've been writtng stories, and i was wodnering if i could use fwg, to show more ppl my work. YOU KNOW, IF YOU GUYS ARE GONNA HATE THIS, JUST GO. YOU'RE WASTING YOUR TIME, HATING THIS. I'M TRYING TO SHOW PPL MY ART, AND IF THERE ARE GONNA BE HATERS, WHO HATE, ON MY HARD WORK, THEN, SCREW YOU ALL. i just want some ppl to appriciate my work. i feel rrly hated now. i wish i could post my writtings on here, with no complaints to reply too. i wish i could reply to ppl who leave HAPPY comments, and answer their questions, and take in suggestions like famous ppl do, and get them all excited, with, when the next chapter's gonna be out. BUT NO!!!! I CAN'T MAKE MY DREAM, EVER SINCE I WAS 5 YEARS OLD. 5!!!!!!!!!!!!! TO MAKE A DREAM COME TRUE. I JUST WANNA FEEL LIKE A REAL WRITTER, BUT I'M ONLY 13, AND SO I CAN'T PUBLISH STUFF, BUT HERE I CAN. AND I'M RLLY HURT, TO GET REJECTED, BY THE PPL I RESPECT, CONNY, WII DUDE, AND ORBY, ABOUT MY WORK.
OH, AND PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME, HOW THIS IS RP. IT HAS NOTHING, ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, TO DO WITH RP'ING. NO ONE IN FWG WORLD, DIES, OR DOES ANYTHING. ALL THESE CHARACTERS, ARE MADE UP, IN MY HEAD.

STOP WRITING SO MUCH ARG!! i read like one line then quickly scroll down and..... *keeps scrolling :s lolol just saying :p good for u to be a writter tho.


(wait that made no sense...)

[purpledeer]

Good job shadow ur writing far better then mine no lie bro

[Shadowstar1922]

Good job shadow ur writing far better then mine no lie bro

thanks, purple! i love writting. at least someone actualy read it. i already posted my story, the first book, Chapter one. look for it in the general chat!

[Dr Frook]

keep on going with your story - it's good. And general chat is the right place for it.

be nice peeps!

[Shadowstar1922]

lol, conny. i'm doing BOTH. i'm still doing the ShadowClan thing, but i've been writtng stories, and i was wodnering if i could use fwg, to show more ppl my work. YOU KNOW, IF YOU GUYS ARE GONNA HATE THIS, JUST GO. YOU'RE WASTING YOUR TIME, HATING THIS. I'M TRYING TO SHOW PPL MY ART, AND IF THERE ARE GONNA BE HATERS, WHO HATE, ON MY HARD WORK, THEN, SCREW YOU ALL. i just want some ppl to appriciate my work. i feel rrly hated now. i wish i could post my writtings on here, with no complaints to reply too. i wish i could reply to ppl who leave HAPPY comments, and answer their questions, and take in suggestions like famous ppl do, and get them all excited, with, when the next chapter's gonna be out. BUT NO!!!! I CAN'T MAKE MY DREAM, EVER SINCE I WAS 5 YEARS OLD. 5!!!!!!!!!!!!! TO MAKE A DREAM COME TRUE. I JUST WANNA FEEL LIKE A REAL WRITTER, BUT I'M ONLY 13, AND SO I CAN'T PUBLISH STUFF, BUT HERE I CAN. AND I'M RLLY HURT, TO GET REJECTED, BY THE PPL I RESPECT, CONNY, WII DUDE, AND ORBY, ABOUT MY WORK.
OH, AND PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME, HOW THIS IS RP. IT HAS NOTHING, ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, TO DO WITH RP'ING. NO ONE IN FWG WORLD, DIES, OR DOES ANYTHING. ALL THESE CHARACTERS, ARE MADE UP, IN MY HEAD.

STOP WRITING SO MUCH ARG!! i read like one line then quickly scroll down and..... *keeps scrolling :s lolol just saying :p good for u to be a writter tho.


(wait that made no sense...)

tbt to when u dragged haters 4 years ago. oh my god. i'm so stupid

why did i use so many commas