Sneak Preview. Land of Secrets.

[Shadowstar1922]

This is my second book, part of the first Chapter. PLEASE ENJOY.
“Applepaw and Spiderpaw are getting their warrior names today! That's why i'm waking you up!” Snakepaw retorted. Oakpaw suddenly felt wide awake. He darted out of the the apprentice's den. The cats were slowly gathering around, and he saw Applepaw and Spiderpaw up front.
Oakpaw raced to the cats. Rockstar was already talking. It must've already started!
“Applepaw, your warrior name shall be Applestream. RockClan honnors your intellegentance, and cleverness.. May StarClan welcome you as a full member of RockClan,” Rockstar meowed. He rested his muzzle on Applestream's forehead.
“Spiderpaw, please step forward.”
Spiderpaw stepped up, and faced Rockstar with shinning eyes. “From this moment on, you will be known as Spiderfang. RockClan honnors your bravery and strength, and StarClan welcomes you a full warrior of RockClan” Rockstar said. He rested his muzzle on Spiderfang's foreheard.
“Applestream, Spiderfang! Applestream, Spiderfang!” The Clan cheered. Oakpaw yelled out the new RockClan warriors' name, but yelled out Applestream the most.
The sky was full of dull gray clouds, even with the new warriors.
Oakpaw looked up at the sky, and it started to snow very lightly. “It's snowing again!” Lionkit tumbled out of the nursery, with his littermates, Jaykit, and Shinningkit. They all tried to catch every single drop of snow.
Goldenfur came running out, trying to calm the kits. “Kits! There is a ceremony! It doesn't need to be disturbed bye you! Now get back in the nursery, and crawl into your beds.”
Lionkit gave a huge sigh. “Do we have to, mom?” Goldenfur have her kit a hard stare. “You have to get a good night's sleep, to you can run around like crazy rabbits tomorrow,” The queen repied.
“I don't wanna go to bed!” Jaykit screamed in protest. “Yeah! We wanna stay up to play with Spiderfang!” Shinningkit protested. Spiderfang had became popular with the kits in the nursery, and the kits have grown very fond of him.
Goldenfur glared at her kits. “Nursery. Now.” Lionkit opened his mouth to object, but no words came out. His tail and head dropped , and so did Jaykit's and Shinningkit's, as they sluggishly walked back to the nursery. Oakpaw supressed a laughter that he wanted to bring out so badly.
“Heya Oakpaw.” a voice meowed. That's...! Oakpaw turned around to see Applestream, staring at Oakpaw, smiling.
“Hey, Applestream! Congrats on your new name!” Oakpaw meowed happily. Applestream giggled, and pressed her muzzle in Oakpaw's cheek. “Thank you! I'm gonna miss sleeping in the same den with you, you know,” Applestream replied.
Oakpaw's pelt began to burn, even though it was snowing. “Yes, and I'm going to miss you too,” Oakpaw meowed. “Applestream, you will have to sit vigal tonight, and watch over the Clan, so the rest of us can have a good night's sleep,” Thorntail meowed, while walking up to them. Oakpaw and Applestream quickly broke apart. Thorntail laughed. “The whole Clan knows it. You don't have anything to hide,” Thorntail said. Applestream walked away, and sat in the clearing with Spiderfang, to start the vigal.
Thorntail gave a nod to Oakpaw, and went on his way, to the Fresh-kill pile. Oakpaw felt so embarrassed. He pad.
ded over to Toadfur, and sat next to him. Ever since he told Toadfur his dream, they've grown closer and closer.
“Greetings, Oakpaw,” Toadfur meowed. Grayheart gave a nod, and Nightwatcher flicked his ears. “You know, in a couple of moons you'll have your warrior ceremony.”
Oakpaw looked up at his grandfather. “I already know that. Stoneclaw's been talking about it a lot,” Oakpaw replied calmly.
Toadfur nodded. Oakpaw looked back at the crowd. The cats were gathering around. Redpaw has pounced playfully on Applestream, and the two she-cats wrestled with playful screams and yells. The cats backed away to give a little room to the cats.
Finally, Applestream came out victorious, pinning Redpaw down to the ground. “That's why i'm a warrior,” Applestream meowed to Redpaw. Redpaw gave Applestream a hard stare, and wriggled out.
She stalked over to the apprentice's den, and disapeared in the darkness. Applestream looked confused. “Why is she so mad?”
Oakpaw got up, and padded over to Applestream's aide. “Maybe because you bragged about being a warrior.” Applestream still looked in the den.
VAMP! EMO KID! YOUR IN!!! vamp is Redpaw, and Emo kid is Lionkit, with his siblings! oh yes, and Goldenfur(Lightning Orb) comes in much more, and Toadfur(Toady) also, comes in more...YAY THEM.

[Aros]

Why did you ruin it? DX

[Shadowstar1922]

Why did you ruin it? DX

um, i didn't the only thing i revealed, was that Applepaw and Spiderpaw became warriors. if i put in the first part, then you would be Epicly Pissed. so, yeah. i just thought you guys wanted a Sneak Peak....