~Land of seecrets. Chapter I~

[Shadowstar1922]

Yes, I wil still post up my book. And Shadow, i took note of what you said to add more blood. I will try. Sam, i read your pm. I'll respond laterz. Well, here you go! Also, i use italics to show what they are thinking. and when i copy and paste, the italics don't show. so....yeah. It's easy to tell when it's happening.
Three moons had pasted since formation of the new clan, by Leopardshine. StarClan had excepted Leopardshine's actions, and gave him nine lives. His clan name, was BreezeClan, and had focused on the moorland that they had. They occupied all of WaterClan's moor, and cut of border connection between RockClan and WaterClan, and MoonClan and WaterClan. Ripplestar had stopped cuasing trouble, but, now, secrets reveal, that even more trouble is on the way.




“Oakpaw! Wake up! It's time to get up!” Snakepaw's urgent voice had all that Oakpaw had heard in the past few minutes.
“What do you want now?”Oakpaw hissed. Oakpaw dragged his sleepy body to his paws. I just came back from hunting all day! Can't I have some rest? It was the middle of leaf-bare, and the snow was falling most of the time lately. Deadfire's kits were born. Tallfur had died of greencough weeks ago, and Honeyfur and Redpaw were devistated. It had only been four moons since Redpaw was made an apprentice.
Rockstar was sick with greencough, and Creekwing thinks he won't make it. Others still doubt that, having faith in their leader. Birchkit, now Birchpaw, is training under Nighttail's wing, and Nightfang had allowed Birchpaw to stay, but she returned home with Goldenheart, her mate. Grayheart, and Nightwatcher had moved to the elders den. Dawnstar, was expecting kits, and her deputy, Firewatcher, had been left in charge.
“Applepaw and Spiderpaw are getting their warrior names today! That's why I'm waking you up, you stupid furball!” Snakepaw retorted. Oakpaw suddenly felt wide awake. He darted out of the the apprentice's den, making the den shake violently. The cats were slowly gathering around, and he saw Applepaw and Spiderpaw up front.
Oakpaw raced to the cats. Rockstar was already talking. It must've already started!
“Applepaw, your warrior name shall be Applestream. RockClan honnors your intellegentance, and cleverness.. May StarClan welcome you as a full member of RockClan,” Rockstar meowed. He rested his muzzle on Applestream's forehead. Oakpaw stopped right in back of the group. He popped his head as high as it could go, to see the ceremony.
“Spiderpaw, please step forward.”
Spiderpaw stepped up, and faced Rockstar with shinning eyes. “From this moment on, you will be known as Spiderfang. RockClan honnors your bravery and strength, and StarClan welcomes you a full warrior of RockClan” Rockstar said. He rested his muzzle on Spiderfang's foreheard.
“Applestream, Spiderfang! Applestream, Spiderfang!” The Clan cheered. Oakpaw yelled out the new RockClan warriors' name, but yelled out Applestream the most.
The sky was full of dull gray clouds, even with the new warriors. StarClan couldn't lift the clouds for the new warriors.
Oakpaw looked up at the sky, and it started to snow very lightly. “It's snowing again!” Lionkit tumbled out of the nursery, with his littermates, Jaykit, and Shinningkit. They all tried to catch every single drop of snow.
Goldenfur came running out, trying to calm the kits. “Kits! There is a ceremony! It doesn't need to be disturbed by you! Now get back in the nursery, and crawl into your beds.”
Lionkit gave a huge sigh. “Do we have to, mom?” Goldenfur have her kit a hard stare. “You have to get a good night's sleep, to you can run around like crazy rabbits tomorrow,” The queen replied.
“I don't wanna go to bed!” Jaykit screamed in protest. “Yeah! We wanna stay up to play with Spiderfang!” Shinningkit protested. Spiderfang had became popular with the kits in the nursery, and the kits have grown very fond of him.
Goldenfur glared at her kits. “Nursery. Now.” Lionkit opened his mouth to object, but no words came out. His tail and head dropped , and so did Jaykit's and Shinningkit's, as they sluggishly walked back to the nursery. Oakpaw supressed a laughter that he wanted to bring out so badly.
“Heya Oakpaw.” a voice meowed. That's...! Oakpaw turned around to see Applestream, staring at Oakpaw, smiling.
“Hey, Applestream! Congrats on your new name!” Oakpaw meowed happily. Applestream giggled, and pressed her muzzle in Oakpaw's cheek. “Thank you! I'm gonna miss sleeping in the same den with you, you know,” Applestream replied.
Oakpaw's pelt began to burn, even though it was snowing. “Yes, and I'm going to miss you too,” Oakpaw meowed. “Applestream, you will have to sit vigil tonight, and watch over the Clan, so the rest of us can have a good night's sleep,” Thorntail meowed, while walking up to them. Oakpaw and Applestream quickly broke apart. Thorntail laughed. “The whole Clan knows it. You don't have anything to hide,” Thorntail said. Applestream walked away, and sat in the clearing with Spiderfang, to start the vigal.
Thorntail gave a nod to Oakpaw, and went on his way, to the Fresh-kill pile. Oakpaw felt so embarrassed. He padded over to Toadfur, and sat next to him. Ever since he told Toadfur his dream, they've grown closer and closer. .
“Greetings, Oakpaw,” Toadfur meowed.calmly.
Grayheart gave a nod, and Nightwatcher flicked his ears. “You know, in a couple of moons you'll have your warrior ceremony.”
Oakpaw looked up at his grandfather. “I already know that. Stoneclaw's been talking about it a lot,” Oakpaw replied.
Toadfur nodded. Oakpaw looked back at the crowd. The cats were gathering around. Redpaw has pounced playfully on Applestream, and the two she-cats wrestled with playful screams and yells. The cats backed away to give a little room to the cats.
Finally, Applestream came out victorious, pinning Redpaw down to the ground. “That's why i'm a warrior,” Applestream meowed to Redpaw. Redpaw gave Applestream a hard stare, and wriggled out.
She stalked over to the apprentice's den, and disapeared in the darkness. Applestream looked confused. “Why is she so mad?”
Oakpaw got up, and padded over to Applestream's aide. “Maybe because you bragged about being a warrior.” Applestream still looked in the den, wishing Redpaw would come back. “Did I really brag? I only said one sentence.”
“Don't worry, Applestream. Come with me, and i'll find you a den in the warrior's den.”
Minttail came out of the the gathered cats, and stood next to Applestream. She led her new denmate, to the warrior's den. Where's Spiderfang? The tom was talking with Goldfur.
Probably talking about the kits. Oakpaw walked back to the apprentice's den. He laid down on his bed again. He dug his head into his paws, and fell into sleep.

“Nice to see you again, deary!”
Oakpaw slowly got up, and he saw the forest, but it was a lighter shade, and everything sparkled in happiness. I'm in StarClan again!
“Hmm, looks like your still sleepy. Long day?”
That's Tallfur! Oakpaw faced the two cats, Treestar, and Tallfur. “Treestar! Tallfur! It' good to see you guys again!” Oakpaw touched noses with the two StarClan cats.
It's nice to see you, Oakpaw. How's Toadfur? He's okay, right?” Tallfur asked. Oakpaw nodded to her. “He's fine. Nightwatcher and Grayheart have moved to the elder's den,” Oakpaw replied.
Tallfur nodded. “Good. He has some company.”
“Anyway, Oakpaw. I've come to your dreams, to ask you something,” Treestar meowed.
Oakpaw flicked his ears. “Didn't you tell me everything in my last dream?”
“Well, we want to check up on you. Wanted to see if you understood this threat.” a dark golden she-cat came out of the bushes.
“Greetings, Thunderfang,” Treestar said, and nodded to the visitor. She looked at Oakpaw.
“Have you guessed anything, young one?” Treestar questioned. “Oakpaw thought for a moment.
“I was thinking that Ripplestar was the Darkness, and the Bright Moon was Leopardstar. I was thinking that the Bright Moon wasn't a bad one, but that you said it to me wrongly.”
Thunderfang blinked, and Tallfur closed his eyes. Treestar looked at Oakpaw, with intentive eyes. “You are ready, Oakpaw. Defend RockClan well. StarClan has chosen well.”
Tallfur disappeared, and then Thunderfang. “Wait! So does this mean I was right? Did I get it?” Oakpaw yelled, afraid that they will not hear him.
But Treestar stilled stared at him, and didn't move. What's happening? Why doesn't she respond? Then, the image of Treestar moved, a bit, and in behind her, there were glaring eyes, digging deep into Oakpaw.
What is this? The image suddenly broken into tiny pieces, like a glass wall being broken. Oakpw instintly woke up,and shot staight up.

[Shadowstar1922]

hmm, i thought more people would read this.... i guess i'm not doing so good.

[Aros]

I liked it,but the reason not many people read it,is it's too long.

[Shadow00]

I liked it,but the reason not many people read it,is it's too long.

No,it's because it needs more blood ._. I mean,I didnt expect it to be Stephen King,but a little(lots) more blood would be great.