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My Poem.

Posted: 21 Aug 2011, 21:57
by Shadowstar1922
the Shadow World.

the World was absent of Light.
Instead, filled with Night.
The Darkness was all i saw.
As i looked around in awe.
The Day never came.
The Light never shined.
To be locked up here.
Full of fear.
But this was my fualt.
for being full of darkness,
and despair.

sorry half of it doesn't rhyme. I WAS STUMPED!!!! DON'T JUDGE ME!!!!!!!!!

Re: My Poem.

Posted: 22 Aug 2011, 01:48
by Dr Frook
it's nice, don't worry! :)

Re: My Poem.

Posted: 22 Aug 2011, 20:41
by mustache
Uh, cool. I guess, I'm not one for poems. Uh, hehe, random post... um, I should just should shut up. O.o

Re: My Poem.

Posted: 23 Aug 2011, 01:59
by Aros
I liked it,but a little depression in there.

Re: My Poem.

Posted: 23 Aug 2011, 10:55
by Shadowstar1922
Thanks guys! :D

Means a lot. I'm working on some other poems.

Re: My Poem.

Posted: 24 Aug 2011, 18:13
by beana 9000
i like poems… and that one