I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

[xD hiddendemon]

Hello, I need your help. I need to know if what i wrote is any good :O. here it is.... bwt a warning before you read this i am a HUGE NERD :O

The moment I opened my heart and let you in
I saw this great love starting to begin.

I opened my eyes to a vision of you
I hope, I pray your feelings are true.

I have loved and I have paid the cost
And I have felt the pain of the love I lost.

But, now, I think I have truly found
An Angel who walks upon the ground.

You go beyond all limits for me
Just to show your love endlessly.

I could search my whole life through
And never find another 'you'.

You are so special that I wanted you to know
I truly, completely love you so.

your great !!!

[Lightning Orb]

Lol just lol.

pfft haha! Why would they do that? XP

[Connor]

Amazing poem dude.

Really good. Haven't seen a poem like that in years.

Really good job.

[Sano]

sounds pretty gut
better than what i can write
gut job!

[Zados]

locked hence its a stolen poem and not made by him!!