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I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Maggot » 28 Dec 2010, 17:17

Hello, I need your help. I need to know if what i wrote is any good :O. here it is.... bwt a warning before you read this i am a HUGE NERD :O

The moment I opened my heart and let you in
I saw this great love starting to begin.

I opened my eyes to a vision of you
I hope, I pray your feelings are true.

I have loved and I have paid the cost
And I have felt the pain of the love I lost.

But, now, I think I have truly found
An Angel who walks upon the ground.

You go beyond all limits for me
Just to show your love endlessly.

I could search my whole life through
And never find another 'you'.

You are so special that I wanted you to know
I truly, completely love you so.
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Lightning Orb » 28 Dec 2010, 23:17

Well
If you want my opinion,
I think it was brilliant!
But why exactly did you need an opinion?
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Dr Frook » 30 Dec 2010, 07:45

yep I agree, really super duper cool.
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Zados » 30 Dec 2010, 08:27

GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby prophet » 30 Dec 2010, 11:24

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com



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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Lightning Orb » 30 Dec 2010, 14:33

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

ohhh haha
I see,
Zados would know.
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Netskyvirus2010 » 30 Dec 2010, 22:43

copyrights are no fun...
anyhow good luck writing a new romance poem :P
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby The Guy » 31 Dec 2010, 12:58

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

Lol, ownage!!!
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Sphinx » 31 Dec 2010, 15:40

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com



actually its from www.sheetudeep.com
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Re: I NEED YOUR HELP PLZ

Postby Demyx » 01 Jan 2011, 02:01

Lol just lol.
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