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Hello, I need your help. I need to know if what i wrote is any good :O. here it is.... bwt a warning before you read this i am a HUGE NERD :O

The moment I opened my heart and let you in
I saw this great love starting to begin.

I opened my eyes to a vision of you
I hope, I pray your feelings are true.

I have loved and I have paid the cost
And I have felt the pain of the love I lost.

But, now, I think I have truly found
An Angel who walks upon the ground.

You go beyond all limits for me
Just to show your love endlessly.

I could search my whole life through
And never find another 'you'.

You are so special that I wanted you to know
I truly, completely love you so.

Well
If you want my opinion,
I think it was brilliant!
But why exactly did you need an opinion?

yep I agree, really super duper cool.

GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

xD

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

ohhh haha
I see,
Zados would know.
Lolz!!!

copyrights are no fun...
anyhow good luck writing a new romance poem

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

Lol, ownage!!!

Zados wrote:GREAT!!

next time you should actually write a poem ON YOUR OWN and not COPY IT from romantic-lyrics.com

actually its from www.sheetudeep.com

Lol just lol.