The Clans. PLEASE READ!

[Dr Frook]

Rp?
Thar is a topic called "Role-play".. go to it, yes!

this isn't role play! Keep it here

[Shadowstar1922]

Rp?
Thar is a topic called "Role-play".. go to it, yes!

this isn't role play! Keep it here

THANKS YOU SO MUCH, FWG LEADER.!!!! THANSK SO MUCH! SO I CNA KEEP PSOTING MY STORY, RIGHT? DO YOU LIKE IT?

[Shadowstar1922]

Rp?
Thar is a topic called "Role-play".. go to it, yes!

this isn't role play! Keep it here

THANKS YOU SO MUCH, FWG LEADER.!!!! THANSK SO MUCH! SO I CNA KEEP PSOTING MY STORY, RIGHT? DO YOU LIKE IT?

um, just to let you ppl know, i don't think i posted it. tht the next chapter might be coming out on Thursday, becuase i finnished Chapter 2 quicker hten i expected. Actualy, i am working on Chapter 4. So, Um, Thursday is the day when i post the cats in the clans. If you guys come up with cool warrior names that you want me to put in, then i would gladly try to put them in. i might not be able to put ALL of them, but i will try!

[Rainshard]

Rp?
Thar is a topic called "Role-play".. go to it, yes!

this isn't role play! Keep it here

THANKS YOU SO MUCH, FWG LEADER.!!!! THANSK SO MUCH! SO I CNA KEEP PSOTING MY STORY, RIGHT? DO YOU LIKE IT?

um, just to let you ppl know, i don't think i posted it. tht the next chapter might be coming out on Thursday, becuase i finnished Chapter 2 quicker hten i expected. Actualy, i am working on Chapter 4. So, Um, Thursday is the day when i post the cats in the clans. If you guys come up with cool warrior names that you want me to put in, then i would gladly try to put them in. i might not be able to put ALL of them, but i will try!

Where is chapter 4. I need to know what happened to Oakpaw

[Shadowstar1922]

Rp?
Thar is a topic called "Role-play".. go to it, yes!

this isn't role play! Keep it here

THANKS YOU SO MUCH, FWG LEADER.!!!! THANSK SO MUCH! SO I CNA KEEP PSOTING MY STORY, RIGHT? DO YOU LIKE IT?

um, just to let you ppl know, i don't think i posted it. tht the next chapter might be coming out on Thursday, becuase i finnished Chapter 2 quicker hten i expected. Actualy, i am working on Chapter 4. So, Um, Thursday is the day when i post the cats in the clans. If you guys come up with cool warrior names that you want me to put in, then i would gladly try to put them in. i might not be able to put ALL of them, but i will try!

Where is chapter 4. I need to know what happened to Oakpaw

this story is dead

why are you asking for it

[Leprechaun Lukia]

You're doing quite well, I must admit.

I'd be very happy to read the rest, I write quite a few childrens books that were published locally, and did quite a few storytelling events.

Just make sure you have a clear storyline written down - otherwise it's like a picture that's a different size to it's a frame - it never looks quite right.

Amy is writing a very good novel at the moment, that is a fantasy world - PM her, she'll send you an extract - it's really great.

Also, the characters names are very similar...you might want to adapt them slightly, just so they stick in reader's heads.

Otherwise, well done, you've gained a fan in me.

THANKS SO MUCH, LUCKY! YOUR MY SECOND FAN!!!!

can i be ur therd fan

[Shadowstar1922]

You're doing quite well, I must admit.

I'd be very happy to read the rest, I write quite a few childrens books that were published locally, and did quite a few storytelling events.

Just make sure you have a clear storyline written down - otherwise it's like a picture that's a different size to it's a frame - it never looks quite right.

Amy is writing a very good novel at the moment, that is a fantasy world - PM her, she'll send you an extract - it's really great.

Also, the characters names are very similar...you might want to adapt them slightly, just so they stick in reader's heads.

Otherwise, well done, you've gained a fan in me.

THANKS SO MUCH, LUCKY! YOUR MY SECOND FAN!!!!

can i be ur therd fan

i hate you all

[Father Anderson]

You're doing quite well, I must admit.

I'd be very happy to read the rest, I write quite a few childrens books that were published locally, and did quite a few storytelling events.

Just make sure you have a clear storyline written down - otherwise it's like a picture that's a different size to it's a frame - it never looks quite right.

Amy is writing a very good novel at the moment, that is a fantasy world - PM her, she'll send you an extract - it's really great.

Also, the characters names are very similar...you might want to adapt them slightly, just so they stick in reader's heads.

Otherwise, well done, you've gained a fan in me.

THANKS SO MUCH, LUCKY! YOUR MY SECOND FAN!!!!

can i be ur therd fan

i hate you all

its ok, I wrote some really bad Naruto fanfiction a few years ago.....